Some people believe that residents are responsible for the place where they live to be clean and tidy. Others believe that government is the responsible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the world is facing many issues with the increase in population. The immense problem is cleanliness and
enviromental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
health of our surrounding areas. I, strongly think that both
government
authorities and local residents are responsible for
this
.
This
essay will discuss
this
viewpoint with appropriate examples. Primarily, the administrative bodies
has
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have
the right to proceed the health and safety laws and to improve the wealth of the country. The administration people spread the awareness about sanitation and new rules at a national level. Many of the backward countries and rural areas suffering from disinfection. It is the
government
duty to extent acknowledgement among people and know how the sterility affects their community
.
Accept space
.
Furthermore
, the
government
release
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releases
more funds for the services
such
as garbage collection and sanitation removal and hire municipality workers.
For example
, the
government
of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
has started the
swachh
a sample piece of cloth
swatch
bharat
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Bharat
assignment at a national level in 2014. The
minstry
religious ministers collectively (especially Presbyterian)
ministry
monastery
ministries
of
environmental
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environment
department
also send
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also sends
has also sent
transfer money for
this
mission. Simultaneously, people
also
spend some time for
cleaniness
the habit of keeping free of superficial imperfections
cleanliness
of
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
houses and as well as
neighborhood
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the neighbourhood
neighbourhood
. It is the main
resonsible
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
for every citizen to throw waste in garbage bins, to clean roads, avoid usage of plastic bags and follow
government
environmental and health laws. Teachers and parents
also
teach children these
etchis
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etch is
and moral values. These rules follow by everyone and future generations as well. In conclusion, living in a clean and good community is a vision for everyone and it is responsible for both
government
authorities and public people.
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