Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that the trend of online shopping of commodities like stationary
,
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,
aeroplane tickets and basic grocery items is on the rise. In my opinion, I consider that the potential benefits of
this
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wide variety
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a wide variety
of choices and less price
definitely outweighs
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definitely outweigh
the drawbacks it might bring. Admittedly, there are some numerous minor negative aspects of purchasing products from the internet.
Firstly
, it is difficult to check and review the quality of things while buying from websites. As a matter of fact, websites use attractive colour schemes to grab the attention of customers without offering impressive long lasting and durable standards.
Secondly
, returning unwanted things
require
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requires
a lot of time in case of
refund
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a refund
refunds
.
For example
, it requires more than two weeks to return or replace any item which has been purchased online.
Thus
, it can be argued that ordering online has several negatives which need to be overcome to make
this
process
effecient
being effective without wasting time or effort or expense
efficient
.
Nevertheless
, despite
above downside
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the above downside
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that shopping from the
internate
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
internet
has made life of people
easy
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easier
owing to a wide variety of reasons.
To begin
with, it has become possible to choose favourite brands from all over the world thanks to the advancement in shopping phenomenon. To illustrate
,
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,
last
year a survey done by
oxford
a university town in northern Mississippi; home of William Faulkner
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university stated that a quarter
third
of Asian youngsters
prefer
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prefers
to wear American branded Nike shoes which they mostly buy online.
Furthermore
, prices of products
has decreased
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have decreased
significantly because of
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on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
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selling. The main reason behind
this
is that business owners save a huge amount of money by avoiding purchasing of shops for their business activities.
Therefore
, it is completely clear that
such
situation
has bring
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has brought
convineance
the state of being suitable or opportune
convenience
conveniences
in
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to
life of customers. In conclusion,
although
there are both positives and negatives of doing shopping from websites, I think that the advantages it provides are much more than drawbacks of time consumption in refunding process and checking quality.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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