Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We
belongs
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belong
to well behaved and civilised
society
, But there are differences between social mindsets of people. It is always argued that voluntary services
such
as charity, aiding
unprivileged
people, cleaning surroundings and
many
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much
more should be part of
school curriculum
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the school curriculum
. Well, I agree with
this
statement and I believe it should be mandatory in every
school
. I shall
further
discuss my supporting arguments in following paragraphs.
To begin
with,
Social community service
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the Social community service
will impact children’s mind in
positive way
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a positive way
positive ways
such
that they understand the way of becoming
responsible citizen
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responsible citizens
a responsible citizen
. Not only that, they can empathise with socially backward or disable people.
For instance
, Few years back, my
school
started educating
student
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students
the student
about
Swatch Bharat mission
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the Swatch Bharat mission
Swatch Bharat missions
and it was mandatory for each student to take part. From that event, I started understanding
importance
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the importance
of making surrounding clean and I learned to throw rubbish in dustbin always
for
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in
a lifetime.
Besides
this
, volunteer work from
school
days adds social relations for a lifetime, which can benefit pupils in their later career process.
Moreover
, helping
disable
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disabled
or elderly people gives inner satisfaction and proud moment, which makes them understand the humanity and kindness. They feel returning
favour
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a favour
the favour
to
society
and get
meaning
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the meaning
of true happiness.
For example
, student who aid at
elderly home
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the elderly home
would always respect their
grand parents
a parent of your father or mother
grandparents
and folks.
However
, few
school
children will find
these time
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this time
these times
as
excuse
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an excuse
to
hangout
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hang out
with friends and might not give hundred percent for free service to
community
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the community
. To put
this
in a nutshell, I pen
down saying
Accept comma addition
down, saying
that even though there are minor disadvantage of
such
mandatory volunteer work from
school
, there are huge advantages for
society
and
individual
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the individual
individuals
.
Also
, I believe it will be one step towards making perfect
society
.
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