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In some countries people prefer to live alone more often than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Why?

#countries #people #development
Art is the way of expressing ideas and communicate concepts.
This
 gives us a clear picture of our cultural and historical background in a detailed manner. Apart from
this
, it is the government responsibility to protect artists and a
rt works.
photographs or other visual representations in a printed publication
artworks
 There are many workers they cannot make enough money to support themselves, so they need to be financially assisted. Others think that art has no use in the society and artist should find w
ay
Suggestion
a way
the way
to earn themselves. The government grant should give to more pressing issues
such
 as health and education. The basic needs of the public should be put before any luxuries
such
 as art. There are many wealthy patrons they can support a
rtists.
Suggestion
the artists
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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