Many jobs require ongoing training and research to stay competitive in a world with rapidly evolving information and technology. Some believe that it is the responsibility of businesses to pay for this training for their staff while others feel it is up to the individual. Discuss both views and give your own opnion.
Nowadays, in order to remain desirable to companies,
individuals
must keep their CVs up-to-date by attending training programmes. Some think that Use synonyms
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is the responsibility of the individual, Linking Words
whereas
others assume it is on the head of the businesses to fund the practice. I believe there is something to be said about Linking Words
both
schools of thought and Use synonyms
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essay will discuss Linking Words
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viewpoints.
On the one hand, there are many Use synonyms
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but cannot Remove the comma
apply
further
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due to
a lack of funds. An unfortunate event, as these Linking Words
individuals
may have a lot to give, but do not have the means to partake in these courses. Use synonyms
Thus
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the individual and the business would be at a disadvantage. Use synonyms
For example
, Rolls Royce has an amazing apprenticeship programme that my young cousin is starting Linking Words
this
September. They train school leavers and mould them into Linking Words
individuals
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further
benefit the company. Linking Words
Moreover
, without Linking Words
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program, she would have looked to get a job rather than furthering her education which would have been a shame thanks to her high IQ and photographic memory.
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On the other hand
, these training programmes are for the personal growth of the individual, which means once they complete the training required, they could leave the company. In Linking Words
this
case, the business would be at a loss after spending tens of thousands for a prospective employee. Linking Words
For instance
, the NHS pays for part of the graduate-entry programme for Medicine since these applicants are not eligible for student finance. Out of these Linking Words
individuals
, a staggering 30% choose not to practice after finishing university and another 15% decide to practice abroad. Use synonyms
Consequently
, if the NHS did not run the above scheme they may have the money to place Linking Words
elsewhere
to ensure current junior doctors are given a pay rise.
In conclusion, there are benefits seen in Linking Words
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arguments, which are heavily monetary. I believe Use synonyms
this
can be solved by a stipulation in the contract to ensure the businesses receive a healthy return on investment, ensuring Linking Words
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parties are successful.Use synonyms
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task achievement
Try to elaborate a bit more on how companies could get a return on investment. Include more detailed points or examples to strengthen your argument.
coherence cohesion
While the essay has a solid structure, consider using more linking words and phrases such as 'Furthermore,' 'Additionally,' or 'In contrast,' to enhance coherence.
coherence cohesion
The introduction clearly presents the topic and outlines the writer's intention to discuss both views.
coherence cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes the discussion and presents a well-balanced viewpoint.
task achievement
Good use of relevant and specific examples (e.g., Rolls Royce apprenticeship program, NHS graduate-entry programme) to support main points.
task achievement
The ideas are clearly presented and comprehensive, contributing to a complete response to the task.