Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some animals are not suitable for the life inside the zoo if they are social animals, which are living in a group;
therefore
, solidarity life in the zoo may cause depression. There are many animals who suffer
cruality
a cruel act; a deliberate infliction of pain and suffering
cruelty
from zoo keepers, staff and
vistores
someone who visits
visitors
.
Ther
Suggestion
There
Their
Thor
is less a chance that visitors learn how to respect animals since they have been kept in captivity.
Zoo
Suggestion
The zoo
is the best place to protect endangered animals and
there
of them or themselves
their
many professionally organised research
programms
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
programs
programmes
are carried out.
This
is the best place for people to learn about animals and after breading many animals that can be sent to wild.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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