Nowadays media should include more good news in there publication. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reason from your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

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Media has a major role in education and country development.People

has always influced

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have always influenced

has always influenced

by the news

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either is is good or bad.

some

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predictor

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predict or

suggest that telecasting a

postive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

news has always

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benefitted

benefited

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

the bad news.Personally, I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that showing the bad side has more advantage

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then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

the good news. Time is running fast people need

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for

the update their self with movement of

competitiors

the contestant you hope to defeat

competitors

competitions

and new technology. On top of it

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People living a

stressfull

extremely irritating to the nerves

stressful

life.

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factors are

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capable of being replaced

replaceable

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with

work

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family problems

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finanacial

involving financial matters

financial

problems and many more.

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people need a time for raid of them self from reduce anxiety and stress.In that situation watching some good news make them feel lighten that something in somewhere happening good.As we take

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an example

, Media should promote the news more regarding the

techanology

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

and sports

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As we know that both news are highly demanded in public. On

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the flip side

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Bad news spread the awareness about the people regarding

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the aft

the the aft

and

gun shot

the act of shooting a gun

gunshot

incident that happened in the city.Media should

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focus

and promote

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more illegal

more of illegal

activity as well frauds calls for pull out the money from the call

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set that receives radio or tv signals

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.That all News help to aware people

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One of my

friend

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friends

saw the news that many hackers ask you about your bank details and take all of your money from the bank.

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day he got the same call from the hackers

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asking him about the

details but

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details, but

he refused

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to give

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in from

the police about the incident and

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give all

the

deatils

true confidential information

details

of the call. To conclude

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Both the news

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has

a good point of

view but

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view, but

as per my knowledge bad news help to people to be aware.So, I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that media

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expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something

should

have to more focused on bad news

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the good.

Tue Nov 12 2019

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Nowadays media should include more good news in there publication. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reason from your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

Fully explain your ideas

How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?

Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?