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In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?

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Nowadays, many countries are treating their adolescents in a way so that they can represent good leaders tomorrow. For the protection of teenagers, America has imposed strict curfew in many areas to restrict them from going out in the late hours of the night. In my opinion,
although
 banning adolescents with
such
 restrictions is a forward step towards the prosperity of the country,
however
, it has its negative consequences as well. On one side, imposing the ban is definitely a good practice to restrict teenagers to go out of their houses after a certain hour of the night without the company of adults. In
this
 way, they can help
themselves not
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themselves, not
 getting involved in any crime. In recent research, it is mentioned that 85% of adolescents have stopped from being a part of
gangsters
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the gangsters
 which was radically increasing before implying the restrictions.
Consequently
, in the presence of adults, teenagers don’t fall prey of the monstrous people of society. On the flip side, the ban on the youngsters after nightfall can prove fatal at times. In some families, they do not have many people around and they rely on teenagers for any situation. I recently read in the newspaper that one family lost their member due to curfew restrictions. A son was unable to go out and bring medicine for his ailing mother as he was not allowed to go out
from
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of
 his house by the police officer. For these reasons, sometimes people become victims of
such
 bans and lose their lives. To conclude, America is looking forward to taking care of its teenagers even though if they have to do it by imposing certain restrictions.
Although
 implying restrictions on teenagers can definitely build a
good
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better
society but
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society, but
 at the same time, it can have negative effects. In my opinion, imposing the ban on adolescents
have
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has
 enormous benefits for society.
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