Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, more and more youth

follow

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follows

an unhealthy routine, eating more junk food and playing video-games

instead

of doing

physical

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physics

physically

-exercises. For

this

reasons

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reason

it is impossible not to be concerned. A portion of the society

think

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thinks

that

this

problem

should be solved by

school

and parents and I fully agree with

this

too. The

school

has the duty to educate the students from

childwood

the time of person's life when they are a child

childhood

onwards, so they

in addition

have to teach them

healthcare

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health care

. To tackle the

problem

that our society is experiencing,

school

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the school

schools

should provide children a model to follow, making them aware of the importance of a good health. In my experience, I think that my

school

have succeeded

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has succeeded

in

this

because

firstly

at primary

school

they collaborated with an organisation, which provided us a wide range of fruit for snack time and

then

at secondary

school

, my teachers organised meetings with doctors, who explained us the consequences of an unhealthy lifestyle.

On the other

hand

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hand, school

school

can only inspire the youth, but only parents can control their bad habits and be strict if

this

will be necessary. Thanks to parents some children do at least one sport like football, tennis or volleyball.

However

, not all families can afford to pay one of

this courses

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these courses

this course

, which use to be very expensive.

However there

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However, there

are undoubtedly other healthy choices

for

instance taking

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instance, taking

their sons to playground in order to make them move and unconsciously do exercises. In addiction cooking more vegs and eat less junk food is an incredible way to tackle the

problem

. In conclusion, I personally think that either

sides

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side

, parents and

school

, have a crucial

roule

the actions and activities assigned to or required or expected of a person or group

role

in children's life and they are the only one capable to tackle the

problem

of their unhealthy lifestyle, making them healthy and conscious adults.