Write a letter to a local authority by requesting additional sports facilities for your age group in your area. -Mention about the current sports facilities available -What kind of additional sports facilities should be introduced? -How would the new sports facilities be a help for the people in your age group?

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Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing
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letter to put forward my request to provide the people of
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area with additional up-to-date modern sports amenities. At present, the facilities that are available at the sports centre are extremely limited in use as there are not many options.
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, it has a designated area for cricket and lone tennis
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some basic exercise session equipment like cycling and a trade mill. The youth should be equipped with more add-on facilities
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as an area for badminton, table tennis, football, and basketball and additional equipment in the gym like dumbbells for weightlifting, increase the count of trade mills, stepper, and cycling so that most of the community get benefit from
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. if more options are provided, it will encourage the children to be more active and fit as they will gain interest in utilizing the new facilities and will have a change from old utilities.
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, I request the back section of the ground that has not been of much use to improve and increase the services for these people. It will be beneficial for everyone, and more people will become active and fit.
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, hoping for careful consideration of the suggestion provided by me. Your faithful ABC
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task achievement
The letter addresses all the bullet points in the task, but it could be improved by detailing how the new facilities would impact the community. Adding specific examples or projected benefits could strengthen the task response.
coherence cohesion
While the letter maintains logical structure, some improvements could be made by more explicitly connecting ideas between paragraphs and using transition words to enhance flow.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a clear and polite greeting and closing, which is suitable for a formal request letter.
coherence cohesion
The single idea per paragraph is well maintained, making it easier for the reader to follow the writer's argument.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate for a formal request, demonstrating respect and consideration for the authority addressed.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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