Learning English at school is more often seen as more important than learning a local language .If these are not taught ,many are at a risk of dying out.

¹Learning
English
is
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
than learning the native
language
at
school
.
This
is because there is a risk of
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
declining from
ones
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one's
life.
This
essay foreshadows that learning
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
overwiegh
fail by aiming too high or trying too hard
overreach
learning
local
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the local language
language
having more positive outcomes. It is clear that
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
is the
language
that is
used all around the globe and the one which keeps the world connected.
Therefore learning
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Therefore, learning
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
is more fruitful than learning
native
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the native language
language
.
For instance
,
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,
a person who wants to study or work overseas and
therefore
the main key
for
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to
that is
a
language
which is common which is
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
.
Therefore to
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Therefore, to
succeed as a country and to uplift the economy
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
should be taught by generalists at
school
.
Local
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The local language
language
is known by all nations
citizens thereby
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citizens, thereby
it can be taught at home
.
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.
Necessarily no
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Necessarily, no
need of teachers at
school
to teach a local
language
.
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.
converesly
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Conversely, English
converesly English
Conversely English
Conversely english
Converesly english
english
language
is merely known by only very few people
at
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in
of
a particular country
.
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.
Thus it
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Thus, it
is clear that
english
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the English language
English language
language
should be taught at
school
.
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.
Also
local
language
is commonly used in a
country
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country, therefore
therefore
it can be easily learned by the person.
for
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For
example the family
,
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,
or friends or relatives will teach the native
language
and no need of
school
to teach the native
language
.
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.
To conclude learning
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
at
school
than a native
language
is more fruitful as mentioned above.

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