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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take Write at least 150 words.

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Dear
Mr.
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 John, I am writing to apologize
about
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 the recent noise that has been emitting from my apartment. I am currently hosting my friends and families for the weekend and
this
 has resulted in a lot of noise.
However
, I can assure you that they will be leaving by the end of today. My uncle is getting married in Nigeria
next
 week and it’s quite a
long distance
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 flight. Since I live in between my family house and the venue of the
weeding
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, the family decided to spend some days at my place before they continue on their trip to Nigeria. Most of them stayed up all night to catch up from old times and
this
 has resulted
into
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 the noises you have been hearing. I am sincerely sorry for the problem
this
 may be causing you as well as
not
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 informing you earlier about
this
 development. I can assure you that
such
 will not happen again. I have decided to rent a clubhouse close to the airport that will accommodate my relatives, and I will move them unfailingly by
this
 evening so that you can have some quiet time. I am sorry once again for any inconveniences that I might have caused you. Yours faithfully, Victor

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