In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

It has been one of the most controversial

topic

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topics

, that the rate of

crime

increased drastically in many countries.

it

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It

is gradually violent in nature

also

. In

this

essay, I will illustrate the possible reasons behind it and how it can be eradicated. Few of the reasons behind

increased

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the increased crime

crime

are

introduces an alternative

or

lack of

education

, financial challenge, social

surrounding

the environmental condition

surroundings

and use of excess social media and internet.

Firstly

, people with less

education

became a criminal in many cases. Poor families where parents are thinking kids as

money

making machine from

very young age

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a very young age

, don’t send them to school. These kids later choose

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the path

a path

of

crime

due to less knowledge of doing right or wrong.

Secondly

, deficiency of

money

lead people to do

crime

.

such

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Such

as people in

slum area

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slum areas

a slum area

, who fight for food and shelter for each day, can choose

crime

for

money

.

Thirdly

, friends and family of a criminal follow the same path, like

brother

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the brother

of a criminal can’t escape to do

crime

.

Finally

, use of excessive social media and technology enhance the

crime

to be more violent, as communication between the criminals is a

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Facebook

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The solutions to

this

trend are

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combined

effort of government and society

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Government should take steps like

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a child's education

child's education

children's education

education

is mandatory in

country irrespective financial situation

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country irrespective financial situations

the country irrespective financial situation

a country irrespective financial situation

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Government should provide allowances to families in below average income for child care

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For

example countries

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example, countries

like Canada provide monthly $1000 per kid to parents having below $35000 annual income

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Everybody in society should stay alert to protect the society. In the conclusion, lack of

money

,

education

, social support, and affluent use of social media and

internet

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the internet

might be the reasons of gradual increase in

crime

. It can be controlled by Government and each individual with some discipline.