The number of people working online from home has grown in some countries. What advantages and disadvantages can come to this trend?

Current days, around the globe, popularity of working from
home
through online increased, in few countries. There are advantages and disadvantages of it.
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In
this
essay, I will shed some light on both sides precisely. On the one hand, few people believe that working remotely is convenient and increases productivity
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Jobs mostly related to computer,
such
as: software engineering
work
can be done from
home
effortlessly.
Firstly
, one of the highly acceptable
benefit
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benefits
is commute time saving. IT
jobs mostly
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jobs, mostly
available in big cities like Toronto, New York
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,
San Fransisco etc.
communication
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Communication
takes more than
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an hour
in
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on
average to reach
office
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an office
, as per news report
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.
Secondly
, undoubtedly, bad weather conditions
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,
few hour family commitments,
such
as
:
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:
attending 30 min in
kids
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kids'
school activity, doctor appointments can be well taken care while working remotely. In brief, the
work
life balance can be smoothly
maintainable
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maintained
.
On the other hand
, less in-person
communication
can hamper the soft skill and promotion in
job
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the job
a job
. Few things in job can’t be done effectively while working from
home
such
as the leadership skill and client
communication
.
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Communication
in
between the
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between, the
team and with higher management is crucial in
job
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the job
a job
. It’s been proved that, being around the team and client will lead to
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a possible solution
to an issue. Researches
shown
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have shown
showed
that
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,
less frequent conversation with management defocus people from
next
goal and
chance
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chances
of promotion. To sum up,
work
from
home
in online can give
work
life balance as advantage at the same time less
communication
in person with client and management might bring difficult situations in
work
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as a major disadvantage to it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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