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The quality of life in large cities is worsening what could be reasons behind this. What measures can be taken to resolve this problem

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The standard of living in large towns is worsening.There are many reasons for a low
quality
life
.While I believe the main reasons behind
low standard
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the low standard
 of living is education
,
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,
money
 and self
centered
being or placed in the center
centred
 nature of people living in a society. Individuals living in a large town who are not educated may not understand to live a
quality
life
 unlike the educated.
Thus they
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Thus, they
 may end up in troublesome situations
,
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like destroying the
life
 through
sociel
relating to human society and its members
social
 media.
For instance
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if a teenager who does not know how to use
facebook
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Facebook
 logs in
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,
the
next
 moment that
younster
a young person of either sex
youngster
 will destroy the entire
life
.
Secondly
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most of the individuals living in a large city does not know how to use
money
 wisely.
For example
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a youngster who just became rich, might not know how to use
money
 in a wise way so he might end up wasting
money
 for unnecessary
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a distinct part that can be specified separately in a group of things that could be enumerated on a list
items
.
For example
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most of the well earned people in my country end up at clubs everyday.
Thirdly
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the society is more and more self
centered
being or placed in the center
centred
.
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.
Therefore
 the people do not care about others
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.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
 the people who have been living in a large city successfully can teach the others to live their
life
 in a successfully. There are solutions to increase the
quality
 of living in large cities.
Firstly
, the schools can educate the children from smaller ages to live the
life
 in a
quality
 way.
secondly
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Secondly
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the government can make laws to enrich the standard of living.
For example
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by implanting laws to close
clubs
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the clubs
.
Thirdly
,
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having advertising campaigns to raise public awareness about standard of
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
. In conclusion
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the standard of living in larger cities which is worsening can be solved by the government and by a better education system.
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