Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foriegn language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantagers of this overweign the disadvantagers?

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tudents learn a foreign
language
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in primary
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policy is adopted by some schools with both negative and positive incomes. The most acceptable fact is that young people pick up
language
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a woman who has given birth to a child (also used as a term of address to your mother)
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unlike the adolescents. The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows them to grab most from
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playful
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which maintains learner's enthusiasm throughout the progress.The command of the
language
will benefit them in later in life as it
also
empowers them to learn about a countries
culture.
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sters they can easily learn the
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the necessary language skills
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