Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Over the past two decades advertising is

indispensable part

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an indispensable part

of business.

This

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days

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day

, some multinational companies be held a responsible for sponsoring of sports so as to advertise their products.

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, some have negative opinions, but a majority of

population

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the population

think

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thinks

it is full of

advantageous

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advantages

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From

my standpoint, definitely, it will impose positive aspects for corporates, individuals and

sport

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players. Undoubtedly,

sport

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plays a vital role in human’s life. Recent marketing trends are radically changing and

sport

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industry has been used as a marketing medium to sell commodities and services and companies and players can benefit from

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this situations

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this situation

these situations

Firstly

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corporates

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which find it difficult to

attending

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attend

global market

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global markets

the global market

can link their name and brand to

successful and famous athlete

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successful and famous athletes

. That means that sports sponsorship provides increased media exposure for a company and its brands.

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, player’s fans pay more attention on

this

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company’s products and, in turn the widespread use of them can increase the rate of sale in the long term.

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, players can focus on their

sport

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instead

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of being distracted by financial worries. The players who are from deprived areas are more likely to suffer from

lacking

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lack

of basic amenities and

therefore

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, they face too much stress.

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, there are certain drawbacks to

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that might have

adverse influence

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an adverse influence

humans’ mind

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the human mind

human mind

. From a social perspective,

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

of sports players

are

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a decisive factor in shaping children’s personality.

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, if a player use drugs and has

misbehaves

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misbehaved

, will

has

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have

negative consequences for both

company

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companies

which sponsored them and society.

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, some companies may advertise products harmful to people’s health.

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situation will be compounded by the fact that fans of those sports players who consume these products certainly suffer from health problems. In conclusion, notwithstanding the product adverts have some demerits, but on the whole is beneficial for both multinational companies and sports athletes.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

314 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

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A growing number of people feel that natural areas should not be exploited by people, and that they should be left as they are, while others argue that humans must use this land to satisfy their various needs, including farming and building. discuss both the views and give your opinion?