Nowadays, more individuals are choosing healthier lifestyles given the fact of not consuming animal products, such as, meat or fish.

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Nowadays, more individuals are choosing healthier lifestyles given the fact of not consuming animal products,
such
as, meat or fish.
Firstly
, it is important to understand and correlate the
importante
of great significance or value
important
importance
and the underestimated value which animal carries at present. To put it simply, is necessary to see how the population growth gives pain and suffer
to
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for
what we call domestically animals, whilst, we are feeding ourselves on a nice dinner table. Despite of feeding population, taking in consideration any health scheme and big corporations and farmers, we need to be aware of the pain inflicted with their massive production.
Opposers
might have a glance of veracity while refuting with the argument that animals do not have
feeling
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the feeling
feelings
or consciousness.
In contrast
, how can we be 100% sure of consciousness and feeling if we do not know if all of us has the same possibility to have it or even to be able to define it.
Secondly
, small groups of society are stating a point while asking how our ancestors, 2 centuries ago or more,
were
we are
we're
capable to survive with a different
diet whereas
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diet, whereas
major part
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the major part
of our big civilization
can not
can not
cannot
have a meal without fish or meat.
In other words
, how we turned to a path where is a strict rule to eat fish or
meath
the flesh of animals (including fishes and birds and snails) used as food
meat
met
mouth
throughout the entire week, month, year and decades leading to a tremendous increase of pollution due
this
massive production.
Hence
, researches have been conducting studies to provide an answer and the results can be fascinating.
Consequently
, more scientists and individuals who are
in
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on
a diet without any animal product, are experiencing less dramatic mood changes and feeling more energy. Making them a living
poof
any factual evidence that helps to establish the truth of something
proof
of a healthy and uncommon path. In my honest opinion, I adopted a vegetarian diet recently and I am feeling the effects mentioned above. I really think, that nationals and individuals must need to make an effort to reduce industrial production and consumption of animals.
Therefore
, the world would be greener and happier.
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