Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often thought that the tertiary educational institutes ought to give admissions in
same quantity
Suggestion
the same quantity
to individuals without considering their gender. In my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
completely agree with
this
view that
equal number
Suggestion
an equal number
of opportunities to obtain degree is the right of every person in
this
world. In the following paragraphs,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
shall put forth some arguments to support my opinion.
To begin
with, flourishing societies provide
same sort
Suggestion
the same sort
of opportunities to
everone
all people
everyone
without considering gender.
In other words
,
this
is the best way to promote egalitarian world in which individuals grow according to their talent. Another obvious reason is that it promotes hard working
in
Suggestion
with
pupils.
For instance
, students will work hard to enter university without being dependant on
quota system
Suggestion
a quota system
the quota system
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • fostering innovation
  • educational experience
  • enforcing gender quotas
  • merit and potential
  • individual achievements
  • natural differences
  • gender equality
  • reducing gender stereotypes
  • balanced workforce
  • traditionally male-dominated or female-dominated fields
  • fluctuating applicant numbers
  • compromise on quality
  • diversity aspects
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