Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #time #loss #species #plants #animals

Many believe that the most significant impact of

deterioating

become worse or disintegrate

deteriorating

environment is the extinction of various types of plants and animals.

However

, many are of the opinion that there are more pressing problems at hand due to environmental changes.

This

essay will highlight key points of both views and present an independent opinion.

Firsty

Suggestion

Firstly

First

, the worsening situation of our climate has affected the

eco system

a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment

ecosystem

of vegetation and the

wild life

all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

wildlife

severely. Several species of the animal kingdom have

aready

prior to a specified or implied time

already

gone extinct from the face of

this

earth, with more to follow if counter measures are not taken.

For example

, the dodo bird was declared extinct in 1964, caused by wide gaps within the ozone layer, which allowed excessive harmful sunrays entering its habitat. From

this

example, we can derive that if

this

continues, humans will be

in line facing direct impacts of these

catastrophies

an event resulting in great loss and misfortune

catastrophes

On the other hand

, global warming is another world wide epidemic which has affected every aspect of life on earth. Due to rising temperatures caused by increased carbon footprints, several countries are facing

threat

Suggestion

a threat

to their agriculture lands, along with significant damage to their irrigation systems. Water supply has

also

become scarce, especially in the African countries.

For instance

, Sudan had to buy water from its neighbouring countries in 2018, as it's streams went dry due to extreme heat waves, and had

also

suffered 2

millions

Suggestion

million

deaths in the previous year.

Thats

Suggestion

That's

why

this

problem requires urgent attention from the world leaders. In conclusion,

refers to the speaker or writer

believe saving our

wild life

all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

wildlife

and plantation heritages are important, but global warming caused by the unhealthy atmosphere should be the top priority.

Wed Nov 13 2019

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

273 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
ecosystem
food chain
imbalance
interconnected
climate change
pollution
personal actions
policy changes
education
awareness

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