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What can be done to solve the pollution caused by plastic bag?

#pollution #plastic #bag
The
plastic
 bag has brought about many serious environmental problems, so there are several methods suggested to deal with them.
Plastic
 bags after being used are not disposed properly. Most of them are dumped into the river, which cause water
pollution
.
Therefore
, people should cut down on the use of nylon bag and use canvas one
instead
 to reduce the amount of
plastic
waste
 to the environment. Another solution is that the
waste
 treatment technology should be upgraded in order that
plastic
 bags will not be buried or burned. As
plastic
 bags contain a lot of poisonous chemicals and m
icroplastics,
 if not being handled carefully, they will result in both air and soil
pollution
. The
last
 but not least, it is necessary that people recycle
plastic
 bags. In fact, there have been some products made from
plastic
waste
. The government should put more effort into encouraging
this
 kind of activity and raising the awareness of its residents about the benefits of recycling
plastic
 bags so that
waste
 will be limited and
pollution
 will be decreased. To sum up, there are many ways to solve the
pollution
 caused by
plastic
 bags, but the most important one is still people's consciousness of the problem we are facing today.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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