Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter • suggest someone you think should receive the award • describe what the person does to help the community • suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to share my view with you

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accolade an award to someone, who has contributed more for the community.

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Mark, who continuously putting enormous social

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among all other

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. His exceptional

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have already made him popular in the community. Before he started his work in

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village, it was fully abandoned with uneducated, uncivilized and rough inhabitants.

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, the scenario has completely faded away after his countless

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, and the inherent nature of these villages has improved.

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, a hospital has been established due to his intense communication with the local government.

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is the only hospital where most villagers come to seek their health. Sometimes, inhabitants from surrounding villagers

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visit to examine their health condition. I am not saying that

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Mark is only making

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in the community, but his contribution seems to be outstanding compared to others.

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, I would say that he is not fond of any kind of financial benefit, but he always preferred to receive recognition from the socially accepted figure, and always expect that his

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ceremony would be covered by the media. I seek your permission till today. Looking forward

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you. Sincerely yours, Devid