Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter • suggest someone you think should receive the award • describe what the person does to help the community • suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to share my view with you
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accolade an award to someone, who has contributed more for the community.
Mr.
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Mark, who continuously putting enormous social
efforts
among all other
social-activists
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. His exceptional
efforts
have already made him popular in the community. Before he started his work in
this
village, it was fully abandoned with uneducated, uncivilized and rough inhabitants.
However
, the scenario has completely faded away after his countless
efforts
, and the inherent nature of these villages has improved.
Moreover
, a hospital has been established due to his intense communication with the local government.
This
is the only hospital where most villagers come to seek their health. Sometimes, inhabitants from surrounding villagers
also
visit to examine their health condition. I am not saying that
Mr.
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Mark is only making
efforts
in the community, but his contribution seems to be outstanding compared to others.
Finally
, I would say that he is not fond of any kind of financial benefit, but he always preferred to receive recognition from the socially accepted figure, and always expect that his
award giving
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ceremony would be covered by the media. I seek your permission till today. Looking forward
for
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you. Sincerely yours, Devid
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