You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with a problem I have with my roommate. Unfortunately, her habits and needs appear different

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my own. I joined Victoria College

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, July 28th for Masters in Biochemistry program, and my roommate is doing her Bachelors in Computer Science,and her name is Susan. The issue is that Susan is a musician and she is in our college band. I understand that she needs proper practice as she leading the piano, as

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residential building is for students who need

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quiet

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for their studies. I spoke to her to convince the disturbance, because of rehearsal

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but was no avail. I really need to have a silent place where I can do my studies which

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proper concentration

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own. My schedule is very much different from Susan's schedule, so I feel, it would be better to move to

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different accommodation. Kindly, provide some apartment which is near our campus or if you can provide bus pass, it would be okay, if

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outside the college. And If you need any approval or need any more details regarding the same, please reply to

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email so that I can explain

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more. Thanking you in advance. Yours Faithfully, Mia