Appreciation: A cruel fact of civilized societies.

We are living in a modern and civilized s
ocities but
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society, but
society but
societies but
we a
re gradually decline
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are gradually declining
our moral values in which the most vibrant element of
this
era is Appreciation that boost the confidence level and encourage people to build appropriate relationship a
mong
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between
them. It
also
associated to increase the productivity of man power. Appreciation is a term r
effers
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referring
refers
to praise p
eople
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the people
on their efforts.
For instance
, If parents figured out their child brought a school performance report almost satisfactory
instead
of saying that you have showed up your potential / done a w
onderfull
extraordinarily good or great; used especially as an intensifier
wonderful
job or you gave your best shot and e
tc,
the thing named or in question
it
its
etc.
their p
arents
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parents'
parent's
emphasis on the only one minor mistake that would be g
et
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getting
better by some more h
ardwork.
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hard work
However
, all the hardships their child h
ave gone
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has gone
had gone
through to achieve
t
his outcomes
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these outcomes
this outcome
gone in vain.
Although
, w
ether
introduces two alternatives
whether
it's educational level or in a professional work these circumstances are remain same. p
eople
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People
put their soul in works to a
chieved
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achieve
the outstanding outcomes from their performances is worthless for the others.
Moreover
, there are various factors like status of life, Jealousy, to see people in a pathetic state, race to pushing people into the poverty and so far. These components drastically increased among s
ocities
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
for the sake of being hang with Elite Class standards and restricted to show their optimism intentions to others. But lately, It is observed a number of people those are confined by their own wall of status and wealth which hold them to u
tilized
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utilize
certain motivational phrases for people to d
epicts
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depict
their potential capabilities.
Thus
,
this
is unfortunate to say that Appreciation is indeed a word which we will only be found in the dictionary if those p
henomenon
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phenomena
are kept constant. In the end, I would like to assert that as being human we have to show some affection towards others and make the s
ocities
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
societies
a better place to live not just for upper class people but as well as for people who played e
ssential role
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an essential role
essential roles
to m
ade
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make
us richer or provide man power to raise our standards of life.

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