In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

Owning the keys of a home is everyone's dream nowadays, but due to
constantly
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constant
rising
property
rates
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property
prices) sometimes it's not possible for all to fulfil
this
dream. Due to which people often rent a
house
to live in. There are numerous benefits as well as downsides too. In the below essay, I will be elaborating the same. The
first
advantage to point out in
this
context is that, on the basis of requirement, shifting a rented
property
is easy. It gives an individual the flexibility to relocate for job change, kids school migration and to fulfil their dream of living in a well-maintained society, even if their budget does not allow them to buy the
property
.
For example
, switching a job is very common in
case
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the case
cases
of private employees, So it is uncomplicated for employees or parents
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take
such
decisions. Along with these merits, it has several drawbacks too. Rented premises, sometimes, do not meet the minimum standards of habitability. On top of it a nagging landlord, who is not willing to fix the issues, is really annoying.
However
, it is well known fact that nobody faces
such
complications in their own home because they can get the things repaired on time.
Furthermore
,
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the relocation
is stressful and expensive as well. Nobody wants to bear these additional expenditures. To summarize, possessing a
house
is beneficial as one can maintain the level of living in their own
house
without worrying much about the expenses.
However
, while living in a rented accommodation people are reluctant to spend on repairs from their own pockets. Alternatively, staying in a
house
on lease is advantageous as people have a choice to change their jobs,
kids
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kids'
schools and home of their liking.

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