Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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modern decade, people are getting more advanced in technology. So, reading
newspaper
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with
online becoming popular among
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the majority
of the people and I argue that it will not be as useful as past days.In my opinion,
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our traditional habit and very soon these trends will be replaced by online news.
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the past days, reading
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newspaper
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the newspaper
a newspaper
has become our traditional habit
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among
the older people. Our father's generations
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mostly prefer
newspaper
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and comfortable with that.
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, we see that our grandparents are
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preferring
to read from newspapers rather than from
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the internet
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, they love to play a game of word puzzle in daily
newspaper
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rather than online.
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, reading newspapers is mostly popular
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with
older people.
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, our generations prefer to read the news on the web.I think that it is more convenient and cheaper than our daily
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.
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, there are different sources of news which are more authentic,
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environmentally
friendly, cheaper and electronic devices are easy to carry.
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, web-based news
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is updated
every few hours and it is easy to get whereas daily newspapers are not up to date.
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, our daily
newspaper
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costs more than 400 BDT which is 9o% costs of the online news which is saving our money. Another very important fact is that it has a good impact on environments as
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not used any ink and paper. So, for
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reason internet-based news is more popular in young generations. To conclude, I,
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, believe that, reading newspapers is the traditional habit of our older generations and as day by
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day, web
-based news is becoming more reliable and convenient, the internet will be replaced by a
newspaper
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in
near future
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the near future
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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