Parenting courses help in children development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people are arguing that if parenting courses could help children's
development
.
Although
the
first
reactions to some people is to refuse
such claim
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such claims
the such claim
a such claim
, there are persuasive reasons to examine
this
issue in depth. In my opinion, there are numbers of reasons to concur
this
statement.
First
of all, the prime reason to support my
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is that children need parents' support during their growing period. So that the parents need to learn how to help their kids.
For example
, my friend Tina's
kid
was almost one year old, and he
is learning
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has learned
to eat solid food recently.
However
, the
kid
was not interested in solid food, and refused to eat. After consulting several friends and doctors, they found out how
to make
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making
the solid food which can be accepted by their
kid
. So it is clear that if there are some parenting courses, not only help the parents, but
also
help the
children
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child's
child
children's
development
. Another reason for my belief is that, most of the parents are not 100% ready to a mother or a father.
Therefore
, parenting courses could help them learn how to be a parent and know more about the needs of their children. Take my friend Tony
for example
, he had a baby boy while he was 16 years old. He only knew he needed to earn money for surviving.
Nonetheless
, his parents gave him a
course
of how to be a good parent, which
course
help him to know the important role of being a father. After all, he
also
helped his
kid
went through
difficulties
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the difficulties
of student life. From
such
example, it illustrated that parenting courses can help
children
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child
children's
development
. The final reason why I
support parenting
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support, parenting
courses is that each
kid
has different issues.
Therefore
, parental directions play an important role
of
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in
children
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child
child's
children's
development
.
For instance
, my friend Sandy was not willing to talk while she was 3 years old. Her parents know how to lead her through some parenting courses' help.
Consequently
.
it
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It
can be said that parent
course
could help children
development
. There is not to say that other points of views are without merit,
however
I believe the reasons we have presented for supporting parenting
course
is stronger.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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