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Since my major is mechanical engineering, I have been longing to use it in

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is about creating a better life. I am very lucky to be the founding member of the most influential campus news media, NTHU InstaNews. Before NTHU InstaNews existed, all kinds of information from our

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I believe that join Media Lab would be the ideal path. During my master study I am particularly interested in tangible media, city science and affective computing. The belief of connecting the physical world and the cyber world is the future of HCI is the reason that I choose tangible media. In city science I believe it’s a place where I can have a glimpse of the future cities. The l

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