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You have had a class discussion on the importance of public libraries. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question: In the age of computers and the internet, is there still a need for public libraries? Write your composition.

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Nowadays, when the internet is available for almost everyone in the world, are we still need public libraries? There are a lot of different opinions for that question. Someone can say that public libraries are not a necessary place in our world of high technologies, because it is easier and more convenient to read anything from your home, thanks to the power of the internet.
On the other hand
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, some people do not have an excess to
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the web
 or are not comfortable enough to use it freely, so they prefer working with real books, which sometimes are more likely to be found in the storage of public libraries. In my opinion, we will need public libraries till the moment when all humans, who are not so keen on
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the web
 and other devices of new generation, are no longer alive.

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