University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages.

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Foreign
education
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after graduation is becoming quite popular and more sought after. I agree that advantages of it outscores disadvantages, because it opens the doors of opportunity for pupils and makes them more
independant
free from external control and constraint
independent
. Of course,
this
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comes at the cost of exorbitant tuition fees and
pshycological
mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
insecurity in parents' mind.
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with the plus points of
abroad
Suggestion
a broad
education
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, it gives an opportunity by giving them exposure of different culture and customs.
This
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succors
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
showcase
scares
their groomings and etiquettes. To illustrate an example of students educated in western countries always differentiate themselves from their counterparts.
Moreover
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,
education
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in foreign
versities
a British abbreviation of 'university'; usually refers to Oxford University or Cambridge University
varsities
enable
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enables
collegians to be more self-reliant and confident because they have to manage their routine expenses, daily chores and study on their own without anyone's interference.
This
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may turn out to be a pivotal point in students'
carreer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
carrier
careers
and
also
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enable them to secure a job in reputed organization with hefty pay-checks.
On the other hand
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, Foreign
education
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impacts heavily on the pockets of students' parents. College degree in India with be 4-5 times cheaper than in Canada.
Thus
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, it leaves
indeliable
cannot be removed or erased
indelible
budget
contraints
the state of being physically constrained
constraints
contents
constraint
on their families. Not only that, but lack of parents' direct supervision may lead them to indulge
into
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in
detrimental habits
such
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as
alchohol
a liquor or brew containing alcohol as the active agent
alcohol
, tobacco or sometimes drugs too. To commensurate, foreign
education
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is trending now-a-days rather than
education
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in
home country
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the home country
. Certainly, it comes with lots of benefits than drawbacks. Especially, brighter future prospects and independence outweigh drawbacks of
abroad
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a broad
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education
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education, such
such
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as
financial burden
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a financial burden
financial burdens
the financial burden
and possibilities of unacceptable addictions.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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