Nowadays museums and historical sites are visited mainly by foreign tourists rather than by locals. Why is this happening? What can be done to get locals to visit museums and historical sites more often?

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Today, advertising plays a

crutial

of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis

crucial

part in every business. Many sports stars and

atheletes

a person trained to compete in sports

athletes

advertise various sport related products.

Although

, it might result in better sales of the

product

, there are arguments that it can cause some

peoblems

a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

problems

This

essay examines both advantages and disadvantages of sports stars endorsing products.

To begin

with, a

product

endorsed by a famous sport person generates a lot of sales and

empolyment

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

opportunities. By watching their star in an advertisement, people may be

infulenced

a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc

influenced

to buy that

product

For example

, Virat Kholi are famous cricketer has started endorsing MRF cricket bats, which instantly boosted the sales of the company by 30%.

Furthermore

sportpersons

Suggestion

sport persons

generally advertise the

product

by playing their sport or by showing their skills.

This

encourages the youth of today to have an active and

atheletic

relating to or befitting athletics or athletes

athletic

lifestyle similar to the person in

Suggestion

the advertisement

. The influence of advertisements with a famous personality in it, is significantly higher when compared to normal adverts.

This

leads to

children forcing

Accept comma addition

children, forcing

their parents to buy them the desired

product

For instance

, a recent poll conducted by Time of India states that more than 45% of parents agreed to have

spending

Suggestion

spent

10% more money due to sports equipment for their children.

In addition

this

, companies pay very huge amount to the celebrity for marketing their

product

. They plan to

retrive

get or find back; recover the use of

retrieve

this

amount by increasing the price of the

product

therefore

further

rising

increasing in quantity or value

raising

the burden on parents to satisfy their loved one's desire. In conclusion, there are various benefits for companies to which

sportpersons

advertise for.

However

, there is

greater disadvantage

Suggestion

a greater disadvantage

to parents due to

children forcing

Accept comma addition

children, forcing

them to buy rather costly products, which are endorsed by the their favourite celebrity.

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