Some people think that governments should ensure that their people stay healthy; others think it’s the responsibility of the individuals. Discuss both sides of the argument and provide your opinion.

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It has been argued by some people that the provision of health facilities is the prime responsibility of the state, whereas some have the opinion that it's the duty of the individual to remain healthy. In my opinion, I think that the government must ensure the availability of best medical setups. On the one hand, as health is a basic necessity of life, so ensuring it's upkeep, is the prime task of a ruler, and I

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, a healthy nation can progress exponentially.

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prosperity is dependant on the allocation of budget in the field of medicine.

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, health department must provide hospital in each and every town along with the best advanced technologies.

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, in turn, will not only keep the nation healthy but will

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increase the country's GDP by ensuring the availability of work force.

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, according to a research published in the European journal, the USA has progressed due to its spending on the basic necessity projects like medicine and education.

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, if a person wants to lead a peaceful life,

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he should take care of his hygiene himself. Primarily, he should keep the environment and surrounding clean.

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, he should not only do regular exercise, but should

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consume a balanced diet. All

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will keep him fit and will increase the working capability. So, individual effort is must, to remain disease free.

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, the Japanese nation has inculcated

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habit of self uplift and has emerged as a powerful country. To conclude, I believe that, every individual has the right to avail the free medical facility and its provision is the utmost task of the ruling party.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

284 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Public health measures
Vaccination programs
Health care
Fundamental right
Medical services
Financial status
Personal responsibility
Healthy lifestyle
Personal choices
Diet and exercise
Harmful behaviors
Government intervention
Overregulation
Personal freedoms
Health-related decisions

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Some people think that governments should ensure that their people stay healthy; others think it’s the responsibility of the individuals. Discuss both sides of the argument and provide your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors, and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Some people think that the media(such as newspaper) should be allowed to publish information about people's private lives. Other, however, think that there should be controls to stop the media publishing this kind of information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shop and on public transport, others argue that people should be free to use their mobiles wherever they like.

Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?