In many countries,the number of animals and plants are declining.Why do you think is it happening? How to solve this issue?

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Decreasing number of plants and animals, on a global scale, is one of the serious concerns threatening the mankind. The reasons behind

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are many, with global warming topping the list. Apart from man-made factors, certain natural phenomena

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add to

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massacre. While pondering over the man-made activities, global warming is found to be one of the greatest causes threatening the polar flora and fauna. As reported in several scientific articles, souring global temperature resulting in melting polar caps put the natural inhabitants namely snow leopards, polar bears, penguins and similar others on the verge of extinction.

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, decade long large-scale disposal of increased toxic industrial wastes, have resulted in loss of the aquatic

species

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. Hunting and smuggling of exotic animals,

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snakes, exotic birds, snow leopards for home decorations

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although

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banned in various nations, is

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a contributor to

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problem. All the above stated factors have caused disturbance in the interlinked food

chains

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chains, thus

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harming the natural ecosystem.

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, natural forest fires, massive volcanic eruptions, and several nature orientations are

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some of the factors cited to declining of the population of plants and animals in several regions.

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extinction

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the extinction

of the dinosaurs is

reportd

made known or told about; especially presented in a formal account

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to be caused by huge meteors hitting the earth and causing major calamities, in the history. Evolving of the

species

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said to cause reduction of certain organism and complete transformation into a new

species

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. A major evidence of

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is the evolving of apes to humans. Apes are hardly anywhere in the world today. Severe extinction of many of the

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have forced

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has forced

the governments globally to come up with strict measures to combat global warming, criminalise hunting and smuggling.

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numerous laws

ahve

have or possess, either in a concrete or an abstract sense

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been passed that monitor and regulate

disposal

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the disposal

of treated industrial wastes, which are not only toxin free but

enviroment

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environmentally

environment

friendly. Imposing carbon tax, participation of the countries in climate

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agreement, such

agreement such

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as the Paris

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the statement (oral or written) of an exchange of promises

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and banning of plastics are

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addition

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added

to the steps to counter the declining population of plants and animals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

341 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
ecosystem
urbanization
deforestation
agricultural expansion
pollution control
greenhouse gas emissions
renewable energy
sustainable practices
overexploitation
invasive species
conservation
quarantine measures
eradication programs
public awareness campaigns
habitat destruction
climate change
natural habitats
species decline

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