In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Many of the people
feels
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feel
hungry
eventhough
Suggestion
even though
advances made in
agriculture
.Not only the
agriculture
any of the field more
advaces
move forward, also in the metaphorical sense
advances
will make wrong signs. In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will
elobarate
marked by complexity and richness of detail
elaborate
the reasons to occur
this
situation in the world. The farmers have been receiving all new tips and resources in the digital world.Due to
this
plural of "this"
these
farmers are willing to do only the crops where they can earn more money.
Inspite
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In spite
of
that the
Accept comma addition
that, the
basic food crops are not available.The incomplete knowledge about the new crops
also
leads to
unsuccess
stories for the farmers. And global warming is the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
reason to loss the crops in
middle
Suggestion
the middle
of the season.Unexpected climate could be the other reason to
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
basic food crops.
For example
, due to the more rains in
this
season most of the crops damaged
with
Suggestion
by
floods in all over the India
On the other hand
It would be helpful for them to learn new innovations in
agriculture
to move forward in
right direction
Suggestion
the right direction
.If correct information reaches the farmers
then
they can do the right
agriculture
.So that the farmers have to know what is the best suitable
crop according
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crop, according
to the soil and climate..
For example
, few of the states in India running successfully with advanced crops than usual In conclusion
,
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,
I would suggest to have advances in
agriculture but
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agriculture, but
have to reach to farmers in
right way
Suggestion
the right way
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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