Wealthy countries should acceptor refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that developed nations should open their doors for more refugees to enter
in
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into
these countries for their primary necessities like
food
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, education and shelter. In my view, I totally agree with that statement because the well-off states have ample resources to fulfil the basic entities of these deprived people and
also
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it is a fundamental right for everyone to survive on the earth without lacking of
food
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and homes.
To begin
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with, these
oppulent
rich and superior in quality
opulent
countries possess huge
some
a quantity of money
sum
of money in their budget for welfare of poor and needy people.
This
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is why because affluent nation's government
have
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has
multifarious sources to collect revenue for
betterment
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the betterment
of their
habitant
the type of environment in which an organism or group normally lives or occurs
habitat
such
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as tourism and corruption-free authority. A study,
for example
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, conducted by a scholar at Cambridge University about the impact on the economy of developed states after refugees settlement. The data revealed that their economy had minimal adverse effects. Yet another reason behind my claim is that everyone has right to get proper housing and
food
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for survival
.
Accept space
.
if
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If
someone is unable to receive basic facilities, it might leave them alone without maintaining their rudimentary rights to love on the planet.
Consequently
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, these poor people might be
vanished
expel from a community or group
banished
from the globe due to our negligence and awareness. To substantiate my view I would like to cite an example of a WHO report,
this
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report pointed out the ignorance of basic human rights and
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
consequences
such
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as poverty and lack of supply of basic requirements. In conclusion, these well to do countries should maintain the availability of
food
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and residence for everyone because they have ability to uplift the life of underprivileged people of poverty strike countries and to protect the basic human rights to survive.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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