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Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people believe that the development of
air
 travel can only enrich the richest person's life, and ordinary people benefit nothing from that. From my points of views, there are persuasive reasons to concur to
such
 claims. The prime reason to support my position is that
air
 space adventure is really expensive.
Therefore
, only the most powerful man or woman in the
world
 can afford. My professor Max told us one trip needs to spend more than 1 billion dollars per person.
In addition
, people cannot take pictures during the trip. So it can be said that most of the human beings don't have the chance to experience. Another reason for my belief is that
air
 adventure doesn't provide specific science benefit to the
world
.
Nonetheless
, it takes a lot of resources for developing
air
 travel. My sister, Jane told me that Europe
also
 supports
this
 project so they provide a lot of investments in
this
 plan as well.
However
,
this
 plan is unworthy for most people in the
world
. The final reason why I support my conviction is that it gives youth wrong expectation. Take my friend, Tina,
for example
 her son Mike heard about travelling in the
air
 space. He asked her mother to take him to experience.
However
, their family can't afford these expenses.
Consequently
, it can be said that normal people of the
world
 can get nothing from the success of
air
 travelling. To conclude, there is not to say that
such
 progress of
air
 adventure is without merit.
Nevertheless
, only the groups of the richest people can have the chance to experience. Salary class people like me that we can only imagine the pictures of the
air
 trip.
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