Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out In restaurants or canteens. Do you agree or disagree?

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With the impact of modern culture, most of the people prefer to eat outside to have experience of different type of foods and to enjoy being out with family. To
this
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, some people said
food
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prepared
at
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in
house is more delicious
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Thai
than
at the outside ambience. I totally agree with those who
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expect, believe, or suppose
reckon
that
home
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's
food
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is far better than hotels, which
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refers to the speaker or writer
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will discuss in
upcoming paragraphs
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the upcoming paragraphs
.
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and the foremost, meal prepared at
home
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is more nutritious and healthy. As, it is cooked with all the homemade ingredients and in a more hygienic conditions. Unlike, in
thr
of them or themselves
their
the
canteens, where people not even wash their hands properly. By eating outside, people got sick rapidly and indulge with different kinds of hand transmitted diseases.
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, in the past, in
UK
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the UK
, typhoid was being transferred by lady chef
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,
who was suffering from
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illness, through contact with her blood, she contaminated the whole
food
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and spread the health issue within the customers. So, the
food
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prepared at
home
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is more healthy.
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, going to the hotels for having dinners or lunches can be expensive, which cannot be
afford
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afforded
by everyone. Lower and middle class, cannot go for foods outside daily, it can be costly for them. So, cooking at
home
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caould
requests polite permission
could
be
more cheaper
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cheaper
. To add on, by eating junk
food
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,
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,
the obesity level in young generation is increasing rapidly, which is
further
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alarming for heart diseases, more cholesterol level. In comparison to
this
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, eating at
home
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is not fatty and little amount of oil is added.
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but not the least, families can have more privacy and
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the unlimited expanse in which everything is located
space
,
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,
while having
food
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at
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in
tgeir
of them or themselves
their
own place, not in any restaurant. They can share their daily chores and discuss important discussions. To recapitulate,
yes it
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yes, it
is tempting to have some fast-
food
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and to experience different varieties of
food
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, but it can be done once in
blue moon
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a blue moon
and eating at
home
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should be adopted as a healthy habit to get away from unwanted diseases.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • promote
  • healthier
  • ingredients
  • portion sizes
  • strengthen
  • family bonds
  • expensive
  • budget
  • creative
  • enjoyable
  • foodborne illnesses
  • reduces
  • food waste
  • relaxed
  • comfortable
  • atmosphere
  • dietary restrictions
  • preferences
  • unhealthy
  • weight gain
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