Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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one school of thought holds that only elite

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should be rewarded, others are adamant that it is even more important to

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those who have made progress. These views are not mutually exclusive and make tremendous sense in their own rights, so they should be adopted simultaneously. Granted, one might argue that only

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with outstanding academic performance should receive

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.

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is predicated on the assumption that these

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have worked more diligently, and justifiably earned the

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scheme, so the argument goes, can

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encourage other

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to exert themselves more to win the

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academic gains across the board. It is

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true that

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winner-take-all kind of competition exists in all aspects of life, so schools should expose young people to

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reality to best equip them for the real world.

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, supporters of giving

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to those who show signs of improvement justify their position by citing the potential stultifying effects on slower

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that the winner-take-all

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scheme might have. They say that

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of feeling motivated to work harder, slower

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might simply feel that they can never surpass those outstanding individuals and lose the incentive to study.

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, placing more emphasis on improvement is arguably healthier than the competitive spirit to win against all others.

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is because the latter relies entirely on external factors, as seen in how top

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often feel complacent after winning certain

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the constant desire to improve themselves can remove

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sense of complacency and works in everyone’s case regardless of how well they are doing academically. In conclusion,

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there are justifications to exclusively

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students

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who achieve the best academic results or those who show improvements.

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, I am convinced that both initiatives are useful in their own ways and should both be adopted.