University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Growing number
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A growing number
of students are opting foreign
country
for their tertiary studies.
Although
there are various benefits of studying
abroad
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abroad, such
such
as getting high pay salary when they return to their
home
country
and getting
chance
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a chance
the chance
of
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to
settle down in abroad, there are few drawbacks
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I
.
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expensive education along with difficult living conditions. In my opinion studying abroad opens new avenue and certainly outweigh the disadvantage.
First advantage
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The first advantage
of studying abroad is that the foreign qualified individuals while coming back to their
home
country
often gets high remuneration jobs.
This
is because the local employers believe that
quality
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the quality
of education is far better in abroad. So, to attract
them they
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them, they
offer higher pay.
For example
, a recent
study
of global consultancy E & Y suggested that in 2018 the average annual salary of foreign qualified graduates was 60% higher than local university graduates. Another benefit of studying abroad is that
majority
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the majority
of
countries
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the countries
offers
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offer
permanent residency to the international students and
subsequently
citizenship after spending
few more years
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a few more years
.
Thus
making more
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
option for international student to
study
abroad rather than in their
home
country
.
On the other hand
, studying in
foreign land
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a foreign land
would
cost
an individual much higher. To elaborate
this
,
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,
a student needs to pay full tuition fees, accommodation charges and flight
cost
which eventually will
cost
him more compare to if
he
male possessive pronoun
his
study
in his
home
country
.
For instance
,
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,
one
recent
study
suggest
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suggests
that the average
cost
of two
years
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year
master program in
one
of the famous
study
destination Australia is 90,000 Australian
dollars which
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dollars, which
is far
expensive
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more expensive
than if
one
study
in his
home
country
.
In addition
, living far away from
home
is
also
quite challenging as
one
can easily feel
home-sickness
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homesick
homesickness
and
one
has to do all his work like cooking, laundry and cleaning toilets which most of the individuals does not do when they are
at
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in
their
home
country
. For
this
reasons
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reason
, the majority of the students become reluctant to go abroad. In conclusion, University students are increasingly studying abroad as
their
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they're
part of
studies
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the studies
. While there are various problem studying in overseas universities like higher
cost
and hectic living
conditions but
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conditions, but
the advantages like higher salary in their native
country
and chances of obtaining permanent residence and citizenship will motivate them to pursue their tertiary education in
foreign land
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a foreign land
foreign lands
.

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