University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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Growing number
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A growing number
of students are opting foreign
country
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for their tertiary studies.
Although
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there are various benefits of studying
abroad
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abroad, such
such
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as getting high pay salary when they return to their
home
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country
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and getting
chance
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a chance
the chance
of
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to
settle down in abroad, there are few drawbacks
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.
e
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E
expensive education along with difficult living conditions. In my opinion studying abroad opens new avenue and certainly outweigh the disadvantage.
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First advantage
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The first advantage
of studying abroad is that the foreign qualified individuals while coming back to their
home
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country
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often gets high remuneration jobs.
This
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is because the local employers believe that
quality
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the quality
of education is far better in abroad. So, to attract
them they
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them, they
offer higher pay.
For example
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, a recent
study
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of global consultancy E & Y suggested that in 2018 the average annual salary of foreign qualified graduates was 60% higher than local university graduates. Another benefit of studying abroad is that
majority
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the majority
of
countries
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the countries
offers
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offer
permanent residency to the international students and
subsequently
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citizenship after spending
few more years
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a few more years
.
Thus
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making more
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
option for international student to
study
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abroad rather than in their
home
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country
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.
On the other hand
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, studying in
foreign land
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a foreign land
would
cost
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an individual much higher. To elaborate
this
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,
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,
a student needs to pay full tuition fees, accommodation charges and flight
cost
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which eventually will
cost
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him more compare to if
he
male possessive pronoun
his
study
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in his
home
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country
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.
For instance
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,
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,
one
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recent
study
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suggest
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suggests
that the average
cost
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of two
years
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year
master program in
one
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of the famous
study
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destination Australia is 90,000 Australian
dollars which
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dollars, which
is far
expensive
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more expensive
than if
one
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study
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in his
home
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country
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.
In addition
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, living far away from
home
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is
also
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quite challenging as
one
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can easily feel
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home-sickness
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homesick
homesickness
and
one
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has to do all his work like cooking, laundry and cleaning toilets which most of the individuals does not do when they are
at
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in
their
home
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country
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. For
this
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reasons
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reason
, the majority of the students become reluctant to go abroad. In conclusion, University students are increasingly studying abroad as
their
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they're
part of
studies
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the studies
. While there are various problem studying in overseas universities like higher
cost
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and hectic living
conditions but
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conditions, but
the advantages like higher salary in their native
country
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and chances of obtaining permanent residence and citizenship will motivate them to pursue their tertiary education in
foreign land
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a foreign land
foreign lands
.

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