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Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

#countries #dangers
It has been observed that
alot
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a lot
 of issues
such
 as global warming have been created from the modernization in many countries.
This
 essay would be discussing the dangers of global warming and ways to reduce these hazards. One of the major hazards caused by global warming is air pollution.
This
 can be found in almost all our environment
such
 as fuel combustion from vehicles and
burning
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the burning
 of
gabbages
food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)
garbage
.
Although
 it may seem ideal to drive a car without noticing
this
carbondioxide
Suggestion
carbon dioxide
 it releases or the gases from burning
gabbages
food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)
garbage
 with the intention of keeping the area clean. It is
stil
with reference to action or condition; without change, interruption, or cessation
still
 harmful to the body most especially the human lungs.
Furthermore
, deforestation is another factor to review as it causes an increase in the temperature.
Thus
 making both the air and
earth
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earth's
 surface very hot. To reduce
this
 jeopardy from global warming, government and should place
strick
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Strick
strict
strikes
 law which
include
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includes
 vehicle owners should use
catalyst
Suggestion
a catalyst
 that makes fuel combustion complete and
odorless
having no odor
odourless
.
Also
,
gabbages
food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)
garbage
 and dry leaves should be properly disposed or recycled
instead
 of burning them.
Hence
, when these are
done it
Accept comma addition
done, it
 would eradicate the excess
carbondioxide
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carbon dioxide
 in the air.
In addition
, cutting down of trees should be prohibited as these vegetations help to reduce the atmospheric temperature. In conclusion, with
this
 stated
points
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point
, global warming can be reduced to a commendable rate. And a more healthy life for humans can be achieved as well
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