Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

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a lot

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as global warming have been created from the modernization in many countries.

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essay would be discussing the dangers of global warming and ways to reduce these hazards. One of the major hazards caused by global warming is air pollution.

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can be found in almost all our environment

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as fuel combustion from vehicles and

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the burning

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food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)

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it may seem ideal to drive a car without noticing

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carbondioxide

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carbon dioxide

it releases or the gases from burning

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food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)

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with the intention of keeping the area clean. It is

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with reference to action or condition; without change, interruption, or cessation

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harmful to the body most especially the human lungs.

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, deforestation is another factor to review as it causes an increase in the temperature.

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making both the air and

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earth's

surface very hot. To reduce

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jeopardy from global warming, government and should place

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vehicle owners should use

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a catalyst

that makes fuel combustion complete and

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having no odor

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food that is discarded (as from a kitchen)

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and dry leaves should be properly disposed or recycled

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of burning them.

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, when these are

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done, it

would eradicate the excess

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carbon dioxide

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, cutting down of trees should be prohibited as these vegetations help to reduce the atmospheric temperature. In conclusion, with

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, global warming can be reduced to a commendable rate. And a more healthy life for humans can be achieved as well

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Developed countries have created many environmental problems. What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ‘one big traffic jam’. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage from using their cars?

Some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Q) Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid any change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing. discuss both views and give your opinion.