Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In today’s world, shopping has become more popular because of the technology. People rarely go out to purchase items like groceries, flight tickets
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books. In my opinion, the drawback of internet shopping has overshadowed by its benefits because of the variety of options available and
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, it saves
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and
money
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. One of the major advantages of shopping online is that it saves
time
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and
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. One need not have to spare
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going out for purchasing for long hours. People order goods
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in online.
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, people can order items when they are working in an office, household chores and
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the burden of going out for purchasing goods for longer hours can be reduced.
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, it saves
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when we order goods during discount sales.
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, shopping
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like Amazon, Flipkart provides offers for customers very often in groceries where one can buy an item for Re.1.
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,
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websites
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provide various offers for air tickets which are very less compared to the original price. Another benefit is these
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give
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giving
a variety of options during purchase. While ordering one can check for the reviews of the product by other customers, can compare prices with other
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opt for delivery options and
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can check for used goods.
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, Amazon sells various
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-hand good products, especially in book categories. Used books, paper copy books, e-books are
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available which cannot be found
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offline sites. Though the advantages of internet shopping are on the rise, the major disadvantage is that local vendors and retailers are most affected economically. Local markets lose their business when most of the people prefer online as their shopping area.
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, a recent survey in NewYork Times
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that 90% of people book their air tickets through these shopping zones because of their great offers and incomparable fewer prices. Because of
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, the local air ticket vendors are losing their jobs gradually. To conclude, internet shopping has taken a new adventure in people’s minds of
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shoppers
which saves their
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,
money
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and chooses multiple options to a
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greater
extent. In spite of the short comes in local vendor’s business, the growth of online shopping
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has been
always on the rise.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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