People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty for a society. What extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the

fact

that people should look after their

health

for personal

benefi

financial assistance in time of need

benefit

,

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,

rather than a duty for a society. In my opinion

opinon

first or beginning

opening

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

completely agree with

this

view for several reasons.  The main reason why

I i believe that

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I believe that

I I believe that

people should take care of their

health

for personal benefits is because people who have good

health

can work productively. In

fact

, these people build a healthy

lifestyles

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lifestyle

and have

posivitive

characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

positive

thingking

the process of using your mind to consider something carefully

thinking

.

This

means that they could earn the large sums of money, so they may be saving up for a long time or buy what they like.

For example

, reports show that officers usually go the gyms to where they can keep fit and boost their immune system, their salary is higher than the other.  Another reason why

I i hold

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I hold this

I I hold this

this

view is that a

country

where the rate of people dying from

disease

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the disease

not

high

objective male pronoun, used to refer to a male human or animal

he

is a developed

country

. In

fact

, a number of sick people

is easily fail

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are easy failing

are easily failing

easily fail

have easily failed

to make ends meet because they do not have enough

health

to work.

This

mean

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means

that the government of those countries

not need

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doesn't need

to spend a lot of money, which can help patients receive treatments.

For example

, the

fact

that

Sweden where

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Sweden, where

there is the rate of people suffer from cancer is lowest in the world results in a

country

of happiness  In conclusion, I

strong

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strongly

believe that people take care of their

health

instead

of a duty for a society because the working

productive

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productivity

productions

of people with good

health

and a

country

where people are less sick is developing.