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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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Information
technology
 is one of the most important aspect of our life. And it is marching towards
achme
an inflammatory disease involving the sebaceous glands of the skin; characterized by papules or pustules or comedones
acne
day
 by
day
, with high speed. But, as it has its pros, it
also
 has its
cones
an argument opposed to a proposal
cons
 which affects our
day
today
Suggestion
to day
 living, at home as well as at work. I personally think, it is not as it looks like, and it has many positive things attached to it.
Firstly
, I would like to put light on the things, which we can do, by seating in
house
Suggestion
the house
. There are many different works, which we can complete online,
instead
 of going and standing in line. All types of bills like electricity, water, TV, and house rent can be paid from
anywere
at or in or to any place
anywhere
, in a click of
button
Suggestion
a button
. I Know a person, of age 65, who used to stand in line for all
this
 work,
now
referring to the degree to which a certain quality is present
no
pay all
Accept comma addition
pay, all
 bills in
house
Suggestion
the house
,
seating
(photography) the act of assuming a certain position (as for a photograph or portrait)
sitting
 on a chair.
hence
(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
Hence
, information
technology
 has abated all time and the extra efforts we used to put to complete
this
 works. Moving
futher
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
, we can
also
 talk to people who are way far from us.
for
Suggestion
For
 example, we can call as well as see them on mobile through
skype
Suggestion
Skype
 or
whats
Suggestion
what's
app
spatially or metaphorically from a lower to a higher position
up
. It
hepled
give help or assistance; be of service
helped
 us to keep in touch with our loved once, even if they are away from us. There is a neighbour of mine, who
talkes
a discussion intended to produce an agreement
talks
takes
talked
 to his
doughter
a female human offspring
daughter
 who is in
canada
a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada
Canada
, on
whats
Suggestion
what's
 app video call. So the
technology
has
Suggestion
has also brought
also
 bring people closer even if they are far from you.
Next
 is, there are many news
chanels
official routes of communication
channels
, which shows every
day
 news to us.
news
Suggestion
The news
News
 keeps us updated about many things which in turn helps to improve
aur
of you or yourself
your
 general knowledge. It is very easy to access news from our mobile.
one
Suggestion
One
 can simply take out his mobile from
pocket
Suggestion
the pocket
a pocket
, and by opening any application, can see live news. In conclusion, I would like to say that information
technology
 has
redused
made less in size or amount or degree
reduced
 our stress and frustration by making our
day
today
Suggestion
to day
 work
easy
Suggestion
easier
 and
hence
 outweigh the disadvantages.
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