Improvements in health, education, and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent decades, the gap between affluent versus impoverished nations has been widened than before. It is,

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, often argued that since those

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World countries have huge challenges regarding ensuring physical fitness, schooling and growth in business, they should be given assistance by successful nations.

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, I agree, to a large extent, the economists who consider

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viewpoint as a detrimental development. We must acknowledge the fact that affluent countries can boost the growth of b

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the backward ones

in various ways. They may share useful strategies and insights to teach them how to build an efficient structure for decreasing mortality, increasing health consciousness, flourish education standard and the GDP growth. Undoubtedly, it would

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more easier for underdeveloped nations t

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higher goals by following the footsteps of d

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developing

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, it cannot be denied that there are severe downsides of

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strategy.

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and foremost, foreign help creates more dependency. Development specialists argue that various development assistance,

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as foreign aid, charity and subsidies, often contain conditions as well as high interest rates.

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, whenever one nation a

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monetary allowances, they are likely to fall on 'cycle of poverty' of being compelled to repay those loans.

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, government's help-seeking mentality o

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more harm than we imagine.

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is because the authorities

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try to sit on idle and procrastinate on finishing the vital tasks

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as enhancing budget on crucial sectors; employing expert health professionals and pedagogy experts; and consulting the top-performer business associates. Clearly,

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cannot be done by any outer influence, except internal powers-that-be.

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, it is the respective government bodies who know the strengths and weaknesses of that country.

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have to find out effective solutions to utilize their own manpower, natural resources and potentials. In conclusion, it seems that it is surely wrong to argue simplistically that foreign assistance can lead less d

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countries into the developed nations. Despite the fact that it has some useful outcomes, it may bring catastrophic consequences for the needy ones. I would urge the Ministers to focus on the ways to get rid out their country of the looming crisis, rather than begging help. They should understand that becoming a prosperous-educated-healthy citizens is on the way only if they be in charge o

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their destiny.