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Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self study is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Reading generally requires concentration and commitment irrespective of whether it's done individually or in combination with others. While certain persons believe it is better to read alone, others prefer doing it with a group.
This
 essay will discuss both opinions and state why it is better to
study
 in the company of other people.
Firstly
, as a student, studying with others makes learning easier and faster because an
aspect
 of the
study
 that isn't clear to one student may be clearer to the other and
this
 fellow can explain that
aspect
 in clear terms leading to
quick understanding
Suggestion
a quick understanding
 of others who don't understand. With
this
, the assimilation period is shortened and everyone can focus on another
aspect
.
For example
, in laboratory sessions, academicians can easily teach different sections of a practical work, making all to have a proper knowledge of the laboratory session. By learning with others, those who are lacking behind can easily catch up.
Secondly
, by studying on your own, you will have a better and thorough background knowledge of a
subject and
Accept comma addition
subject, and
 with
this
, the learner can fully understand the topic of
study
 when compared to studying with others where you only master an
aspect
.
For example
, a practical session carried out individually will help the learner to practise the entire steps and have total knowledge of the process. Doing
this
 will help the person to
study
 much better.
Thirdly
, it is better to
study
 in a group of others especially for courses that require practise. By doing so, students can see alternate methods of getting things done faster or better than how they think it should be done, leading to a shortened learning time frame In conclusion, it is beneficiary to learn with others as
this
 will foster good working relationship with colleagues and ensure that academicians are collaborating in a proper educational environment.
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