The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's era school students have become more independent in all the terms, whether it is

studies

Suggestion

studying

, social activities, sports, clothing etc. In my opinion, there should not be any restrictions over student's clothing pattern or what should they wear while attending the school. At

first

, forcing students to follow a uniform would create a chaos in between students.

students

Suggestion

Students

are becoming more responsible towards their career by choosing the correct study program.

Moreover

, they have the freedom to choose whatever

study they

Accept comma addition

study, they

would like to pursue in order to land a correct job.

For example

, forcing them to follow strict

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

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101 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

1. Standard of health
2. Average
3. Lower
4. Future
5. Aging population
6. Chronic diseases
7. Sedentary lifestyle
8. Lack of exercise
9. Poor dietary habits
10. Environmental pollution
11. Technological advancements
12. Impact on health

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fully explain your ideas

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