Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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many believe that educating girls and boys in the same schools is beneficial, others, including me think that separate schooling is a better option. Mixed schooling at times creates embarrassments while attending separate schools improves confidence in answering questions. On the one hand, mixed schooling is said to be effective for both genders because they pretend to behave well in front of opposite genders and study beforehand just to show off their talents.
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, In India many schools are mixed
gender
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, both girls and boys prepare their lessons beforehand to be able to answer questions asked by teachers,
thus
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to create a good impression in front of other
gender
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. As well as to
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, they participate in sports to win and get girls attention and
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behaviour is noticed to be well mannered.
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mixed schools have only attention seeker impact on each other and not suited for
actual learning process
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the actual learning process
.
On the other hand
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, separate schooling develops confidence while answering
to
being one more than one
two
questions asked by school teachers. As, they do not have to fear for facing embarrassments in front of
opposite
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the opposite gender
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if
answers
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the answers
go wrong. They confidently ask questions if not understood and they seem to feel more comfortable in asking more clarity on unclear subject.
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, Science practical conducted in mixed
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schools in regards to
learning function
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the learning function
of human private parts could create embarrassments and questions are not asked to clarify detailed information on it.
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Thus separate
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Thus, separate
schooling is more effective in educating girls and boys. In conclusion,
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mixed schools are thought to be effective, it could put students in awkward situation at times. Whereas same
gender
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schooling is indeed very beneficial for both genders as discussed above and I strongly agree
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notion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • co-education
  • gender segregation
  • peer pressure
  • academic performance
  • gender stereotypes
  • discrimination
  • social skills
  • teamwork
  • collaboration
  • diversity
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