Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Although
many believe that educating girls and boys in the same schools is beneficial, others, including me think that separate schooling is a better option. Mixed schooling at times creates embarrassments while attending separate schools improves confidence in answering questions.
On the one hand, mixed schooling is said to be effective for both genders because they pretend to behave well in front of opposite genders and study beforehand just to show off their talents. For example
, In India many schools are mixed gender
, both girls and boys prepare their lessons beforehand to be able to answer questions asked by teachers, thus
to create a good impression in front of other gender
. As well as to this
, they participate in sports to win and get girls attention and hence
behaviour is noticed to be well mannered. Thus
mixed schools have only attention seeker impact on each other and not suited for actual learning process
.
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the actual learning process
On the other hand
, separate schooling develops confidence while answering to
questions asked by school teachers. As, they do not have to fear for facing embarrassments in front of being one more than one
two
opposite
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the opposite gender
gender
if answers
go wrong. They confidently ask questions if not understood and they seem to feel more comfortable in asking more clarity on unclear subject. Suggestion
the answers
For instance
, Science practical conducted in mixed gender
schools in regards to learning function
of human private parts could create embarrassments and questions are not asked to clarify detailed information on it. Suggestion
the learning function
Thus separate
schooling is more effective in educating girls and boys.
In conclusion, Accept comma addition
Thus, separate
although
mixed schools are thought to be effective, it could put students in awkward situation at times. Whereas same gender
schooling is indeed very beneficial for both genders as discussed above and I strongly agree on
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with
this
notion.Submitted by naziya.bustani on
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