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It is generally believed that Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays the means of communication are lot of: one of them is the Internet, where you can find information
such
 as reading news or searching something, but many people believe that it is not a good place to do
this
, because the information couldn't be true.
This
 concept comes from the huge possibility of using the Internet,
thus
 someone could write wrong things,
consequently
 another could consider it right. Behind everything, the is the lack of controlling,
therefore
 some people prefer going to the library and buying a specific book on that topic.
Moreover
, when you find something on the website, as Google, the results shown on it are those sponsoring by advertisement. Contrary to
this
, other people suggest how finding information on the Internet is swift and immediate. In
this
 way, you shouldn't waste too much time, when you need something. At the same time, in my opinion you have to check if the searching results are right and true and in that case you spend more hours.
Furthermore
, the Internet leads to compare many essays together and summing up the ideas, you can get a complete preparation. At the end, using the website to find report is better, rather than waste time on unnecessary things, like buying a book. The most important advantage is the free use,
instead
 of paying an expensive book or someone to teach you something.
In other words
, with a smartphone,
also
 poors could study some subject by themselves;
in addition
, if you couldn't buy an Internet connection, there are a lot of places or spaces, where the access to the web is free, thank to nothing key password to WI-FI.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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