Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Although
it is thought by some that recently people's choice has increased tremendously. In my opinion, I agree that in recent times people have varieties of choice to make. A good reason for too many choices being made by people is
as a result
of
effectiveness
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the effectiveness
and quality of the products or services rendered to the public.
However
, most companies do not consider the people's
needs
Accept comma addition
needs, therefore
therefore
, they are only after their profits
hence
, producing goods in quantity and not considering the quality of the products being produced.
This
results to people devaluing the products or services, thereby, trying to make different choices
inorder
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in order
to meet up to their target.
For instance
, most items or services being rendered to the public, at the end if people are not encouraged with the services or goods, most people can easily switch to another. Another reason to consider is that most of the items or services rendered
is
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are
very expensive.
Moreover
, consumers usually accesses the products or services they want to purchase, thereby, checking for the quality of the products and if eventually, the cost of the products does not worth it, people
therefore
, makes a different choice.
Lastly
, people have too many choices when the services they intend using is not delivering properly to their satisfaction, even after the expenses made.
For instance
, most people prefer receiving health treatment in government facilities because they believe that most expert health professionals
such
as, surgeons, nurses, medical laboratory scientist and so on are all employed in government facilities. In conclusion, individuals can have varieties of choices to make if their needs are not properly met or are not really satisfied
on
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with
the products purchased.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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