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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time To what extent do you agree

#computers #languages #waste #time
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According to some people, since computers can help us with a quick and accurate translation of languages from other social c
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believe written texts do not totally convey the intention of the speaker, making it expedient to learn alien tongues and d
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 - to- word applications on mobile phones and personal computers, has made it possible to translate almost all languages. People do not have to pay astronomical fees t
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entirely different tongue even if comprehension is limited. The use of online translators and technologies has made it possible for a Spanish, who has zero knowledge of French, to easily read what a French Speaker is saying by tuning in to his applications,
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 does not necessarily translates to understanding because
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 is understood in context and not
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. Unfortunately, written words only give an objective view of the situation without taking into account the circumstances when the
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. Most languages often use a single word to express different meanings.
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, the gesticulations and facial expressions of the speaker, which are totally absent in words, gives an added but important information to the conveyed
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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